Edit Terimbere School Documents

Status: Stalled
Time needed: 
Two hours
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3

From time to time we will be posting documents that need attention (editing spelling, grammar, etc). Please help us edit these documents and then re-attach the edited versions to this post.

Thanks!

First documents that need editing and comments.

Please see attached
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Anna Soper

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Another document to peruse/edit. See attached.

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Anna Soper

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Hi Anna,

I would love to contribute to this task.

Jeremy Ecle

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..I came that they may have life and that they may have it abundantly..

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Awesome! Thanks for your contribution Jeremy. Please take a look at the documents (there will no longer be a 3rd, so its just the 2 already posted) and let us know your opinion and your editing marks.

Cheers!

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Anna Soper

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Can you send an editable doc, I can put it back into PDF.

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Jeff

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Hi Jeff,

I guess we'll just be needing the one termimbere.doc document edited because I haven't received any of the other documents in any form besides pdf. If you'd like to take the word document, that would be great!

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Anna Soper

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Please let me know if you require additional assistance.
-Lisa

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Hi Lisa,

You could look at Terimbere.doc and make your edits - two editors is surely better than just one! And if there is some way you could edit or comment on the pdf flyer please do so and post your remarks on this forum.

Thanks!

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Anna Soper

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Hi Anna,

Bon Jour!

I have looked at the document at first glance it seems that there are no errors on the document however I will examine the documents more closely for the second time and see if there are any editable words or sentences on the documents.

All the best,

Jeremy Ecle
jeremyecle@yahoo.com

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I'm attaching the documents. Both are in MS Word. I stripped the text from the PDF and put it in a word document so it is not formatted like the poster. You will see some highlights in yellow (2 or 3) which means I didn't understand what the writer was trying to say. The green highlight (one) is for the inconsistency in the 2 statements.i.e. there is a reference for youth "6 to 30" and then later "seven to twenty five".
hope its of use.

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Hi Lisa,

Bon Jour!

Welcome to the nabuur community. Your contribution is very much welcome. Thanks for looking into the documents that Anna has posted. I will check your edition and see what changes you made.

All the best,

Jeremy Ecle

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.. fly high ..

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Dea all,

Thank you very much. You've done a big thing here.
There are also many things to do.

In the document TERIMBERE 0-1 attached to the assignment by Anna, you will find a list of suggested task (help to draft the answers of these QUESTIONS they will be posted to our web site)

We need to write articles that will be posted to our web site under development.

QUESTIONS:
Are those articles (suggested list) needed to be developed to our web site?

Thanks

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ASASS-BURUNDI
Buterere community
Local representative

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Thanks so much Lisa!

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Anna Soper

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Hi Lisa,

Thanks again for the work you've helped us with in our village. I'm wondering if there is another task you'd be interested on for the next week. I don't expect it should take too long once you have the information you need.
The task is located here at http://www.nabuur.com/en/village/buterere/project/task/fill-out-project-... and basically entails filling out an application form for a donation from the Marie Antoinette Carlier Fund.

Please let me know if this is something you'd be able to work on this coming week (and note the tight deadline).

Thanks a lot!

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Anna Soper

ps: I noticed from your profile you are located in Ottawa... so am I!

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Dear Anna,

I would like to provide assistance on this task, however being new on this (both Nabuur and online volunteering), I am not sure where i can find the answers for the form.

guidance will be appreciated and do let me know of any other needs to which i may be of help.

thank you
Anna

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