Dear all,

My task was to review the business plan. In order to do so I have made a new document and put it under the utton resources.
Some things that still need to be done:

 

- The costs of buying the drinks (that will be sold in the internet cafe) are not in the current cost overview. This still needs to be done. I can not do this since I do not know what the prices of these drinks are

 

- Currently the proposal was written in the 'You should' way. I understood that this business plan shall be used to persuade investors to give money/hardware/expertise etc. Am I right? In that case the set up of the proposal must be changed.

 

If you need any more help, just let me know!

Greetings,
Thera