Hi Paul, Dave and others,
If at any stage of the Plan you would like me to have a look at it and comment in any way I can, please just let me know.
I am also here for any help regarding the tourism element of the village's plans.

Dear Barry,
Thank you for your questions, Dave is the one making the plan now as i learn more from my community and see more opportunities,I like if you give us alot of tourism knowledge you have,and i know our plan will work.do you have an idea where we can get funding?

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Can this link be of any help to us now?
http://www.fundsforngos.org/latest-funds-for-ngos/equator-prize-for-redu...
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Hi Barry. Thanks. I will be posting the plan in this forum regularly for anyone to read & comment on.
Dave

please update your email.

Barlt Jaji

Hello
I have attached the latest EOC Plan. It has some general document formatting, reworked introduction and some of Tom's comments posted in a previous version of the Plan. Some of Tom's questions are still outstanding and are as follows - any hints welcomed:

3.4 Out-migration
"The departure of EOCs’ affluent population has had both negative and positive significant impact on the local landuse, the wildlife found solace in the deserted EOC"
Tom's Question: What are these negative & positive impacts?

3.10 Ranch Activities
Relating to the bullet list of activities, Tom's comment: I THINK YOU NEED TO DEVELOP EACH OF THESE POINTS AND THEN TRANSITION INTO THE ECONOMIC ACTIVITY

4.5 Wildlife Utilization
"Wildlife has no direct impact on human life;" Tom asks if "Wildlife may not seem to have a direct impact..." would be better, suggesting the impact *is* there but its not apparent or appreciated; which is the real drive of the rest of that chapter. Any objections to rewording that initial sentence?

4.6 Wildlife investments
There is a bit of confusion what the opening paragraph is about. I will try to understand it and see if I can make it clearer. However, any assistance on this welcomed.

4.7 Wildlife Problems
Requires expansion?

5.4 Proposed Wildlife Users
Does this list require some expansion for each bullet point?

6.2 Equipment & Facilities
Does this list require some expansion for each bullet point?
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I also have Heather's comments from her earlier post to consider too.
I hope the Plan is seen as improved.
Regards
Dave

Empaash Oloirienito Conservancy.doc

Thanks Dave for the great inputs to the Plan.

Raphael

Hi to you all,
Well done to Dave and others who have worked on the plan to date.
I'm going to download the plan now and try to work through it over the next 10 days and see how I can help you in your work and goals.
My initial comment would be on point 4.5.
My reaction is that this old wording is completely the wrong attitude to take to wildlife. Even more so when the project’s aim is to create an ecotourism camp ! So, certainly, I would change the wording as you suggest. But it needs to be much more than simply wording. There’s a huge issue of genuine attitude towards wildlife. A positive attitude to wildlife and its critical role in an environment and its biodiversity is central to ecotourism thinking.
So let me read all and revert then.
All the best.

Hello Barry & Dave,
I hope your both fine and enjoy the warm weather of the summer .I am ok too just came back from NY UN conference .I thought it is good idea touch base again so we get t o know how far Dave have been able to put he arrangement of the Plan
Since the EMPAASH OLOIRIENITO HAVE BEEN REGISTER as a land owners community Trust,the members now are preparing to open a bank account to put their subscriptions.It will be better if we can arrange the conservation plan and submit it to donors for funding
Paul

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Hi Paul
Its great to hear from you. I have not made much more progress on the plan. I posted up some of Toms comments some time ago, hoping for some more feedback on them; and I was also hoping we would get Barry's comments too, but it appears they havent been on Nabuur for some months now.

However, Paul, what are your comments on the Plan as it is now?
Dave

Here's a slight update of the Conservation Plan: a new front cover and page numbers. It makes it a bit more consistent with the Dev Proposal Paul posted in another task, and I think it looks a bit more professional.

Dave

Empaash Oloirienito Conservancy.doc

I am an experienced editor and am happy to help out :-)

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Jenny Kellett - Professional Copywriter and Lover of the Earth :-)

Hi Jenny ,I would like to to introduce your self to the neighbors before you engage in the work of EOC,otherwise thank you for you interest in helping
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Dear Paul,

Possibly Dave, Barry or Stanley would like to help with venue & corporate sponsorship letters as well. We can use a standard letter we have from John and email them out. We can then be consistent with our goal.

Did we hear anything from Kenya Wildlife yet?

Sincerely,
Heather

DearHeather,
Thank you for remembering such anicewayof involving Dave .Barry Stanley and rest of the Neighbours of Kajiado Village,
I wellcome all the posible supportto this cause
Thank you so much
Paul
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