Review and Make Suggestions for Edits to our Website
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Hi neighbors,
I'm pleased to inform you that our village Kohat, has got it's (Fatima Jinnah Educational Complex) website completed but a bit changed from the earlier one.
Your cautious look can guide us in the best way. Please read it vigilantly & let us know about your kind comments.
Best regards,
Adnan khan.

Hi Adnan
I know I have made this comment before under the news section, but thought I should post it under this task too.
Please can you tell us who wrote the words on your website, was it you or Marina?
They do not match the information that you have posted on Nabuur, as they give the impression that FJEC is a well-established school. In reality, you are just starting out.
A couple of examples
http://www.fatimajec.org/admission.html
http://www.fatimajec.org/about_us.html
Are you formally registered as a non-profit organisation, are your courses recognised, and how does the scholarship scheme work?
If you hope to use the website to attract outside support (either practical or financial) then it needs to be accurate, describing the current situation, what you hope the school will become in the future, and what assistance you need to get to that point. People reading the Nabuur website and comparing it to the FJEC site will be confused, and wonder which is the true situation. Those potential supporters will ask similar questions to the ones I am asking.
If the information is intended for potential students, they need accurate information too so that they can decide if they want to attend your school.
Please don't be offended by my comments, they are intended to be constructive, aimed at improving the website.
Mary